Post by Kii on Jul 30, 2007 16:53:15 GMT -5
So I entered a writting contest and we had to write about four intertwing objects and we had to inculed a ird in there. So what I wrote is "The Birds of the Seasons". Would you guys crit on me so that I know if this make sence any so forth? Thanks!
The seasons change, the seasons flow, one always leading into another.
First comes the winter, with its frozen landscapes and chilling winds, brought in by the soft feathers of the Winter Falcon whose plumage is white and blue. He brings in the cold and ice and can either be harsh or calm, which ever his temper decides.
Then in comes the fair Spring Eagle, when winter is done roosting, who warms the earth and melts the ice all in her own doing. She is the one that kisses the plants and tells them to awake from their slumbers. She is the one that calls to the animals and tells them to come out of hiding. She is always gentle and always kind, and places love into all our hearts.
Next comes the Summer Hawk who swoops in and takes over. He brings with him the dry heat and plentiful food. He tells everyone to eat and be marry, but to not take more then they need. He brings in some storms of water so that every may find plenty to drink, and so that the plant may keep making food for others to eat.
Last comes the fall’s cool winds, sweeping through the lands like the Fall Harrier herself. To bring warning that the Winter Falcon is coming and to make sure what time is left is spent in preparation. She lulls the plants into sleep so that they might survive the bitting cold, and whispers caution into the animal’s ears so that they know what they must do. When everyone is tucked away she springs into the air, to leave the lands to Falcon’s hands her warnings left hanging in the air.
And so you see that these four things intertwine among themselves. To help us live and to survive each in its own good time.
The seasons change, the seasons flow, one always leading into another.
First comes the winter, with its frozen landscapes and chilling winds, brought in by the soft feathers of the Winter Falcon whose plumage is white and blue. He brings in the cold and ice and can either be harsh or calm, which ever his temper decides.
Then in comes the fair Spring Eagle, when winter is done roosting, who warms the earth and melts the ice all in her own doing. She is the one that kisses the plants and tells them to awake from their slumbers. She is the one that calls to the animals and tells them to come out of hiding. She is always gentle and always kind, and places love into all our hearts.
Next comes the Summer Hawk who swoops in and takes over. He brings with him the dry heat and plentiful food. He tells everyone to eat and be marry, but to not take more then they need. He brings in some storms of water so that every may find plenty to drink, and so that the plant may keep making food for others to eat.
Last comes the fall’s cool winds, sweeping through the lands like the Fall Harrier herself. To bring warning that the Winter Falcon is coming and to make sure what time is left is spent in preparation. She lulls the plants into sleep so that they might survive the bitting cold, and whispers caution into the animal’s ears so that they know what they must do. When everyone is tucked away she springs into the air, to leave the lands to Falcon’s hands her warnings left hanging in the air.
And so you see that these four things intertwine among themselves. To help us live and to survive each in its own good time.
